FADE - IN
1 . ) AT THE G2000 SHOP - NIGHT
Keyla just end work and saying goodbye to her colleague and also her manager . And went out from the store .
Keyla
Bye guys !!! See you again .
2 . ) WALKING UP THE BRIDGE - NIGHT
Keyla ( V . O )
My name is Keyla and my age is 20 . I lead with a very normal life and the most critical problem that I’m having now is KIDNEY FAILURE . But my life have to go on .
3 . ) ON THE BRIDGE - NIGHT
She’s on the bridge looking down the streets while her hands are in the pocket reaching for her phone and she accidentally drop her IC in the same right pocket and didn’t even realize it and happily just check on her phone .
4 . ) ON THE BRIDGE - NIGHT
5 minutes later a stranger who’s crossing by the same bridge saw her IC and took it .
DISSOLVE TO :
5 . ) NEAR BUNGALOW - NIGHT
Straight after the stranger gets the IC , he went to some loan shark place and used that IC to loan money .
CUT TO :
6 . ) IN DANIEL’S HOUSE - DAY
Reaching for medicine and took a glass of plain water and walk to his mum who’s lying down on the sofa and help to feed the medicine .
Daniel ( V . O )
My name is Daniel and this is my mum , Mrs Van . I’m working as a money collector for the loan shark .
CUT TO :
7 . ) ALONG THE DIALYSIS CENTRE - DAY
Daniel was walking while holding his mum hand along the dialysis centre when he saw this girl walking towards him and something about her that caught Daniel’s eyes .
DISSOLVE TO :
8 . ) AT THE TRAFFIC LIGHT - DAY
One of Daniel’s friend phone rang and he pick up and it was their boss asking him to do his next job that is to go to another house with Daniel as they were working as a money collector for the loan shark .
His Friend
Hello .
Boss ( V . O )
HELLO !!! I want you to called this number 82317758 and talk to this girl name Keyla , and then go to her house at block 449 Bukit Panjang Ring Road # 07 - 571 and find her .
His Friend
( Dialling number … )
His Friend
( Number Busy … )
9 . ) OUTSIDE KEYLA HOUSE INFRONT OF THE DOOR - DAY
Daniel knock the door a couple of time and pressing the door bell .
Daniel
HELLLO !!!
( Banging and kicking the door hard )
Daniel
OPEN UP THE DOOR !!!
( Banging at the door hard )
When Keyla open the door , Daniel was shocked and stumble .
Daniel
Urh … hhh … hh … hi
( stammering … )
Keyla
Hi .
Daniel
You must be … Ms Key … ey …
( stammering … )
Keyla
Yes , I’m Keyla .
His Friend
PAY UP NOW !!!
( With anger , he pushing the door open )
Keyla
HUH !!! PAY UP FOR ???
( Lost and Blurr … )
His Friend
YOU OWN US MONEY WHAT . SO YOU BETTER PAY UP NOW !!!
( Angry and frustrated )
Daniel suddenly grab his friend and walked away . They went to the nearest vending machine just opposite Keyla’s block .
Daniel
Eh ! Can you passed me her number ??
His Friend
Haiya , for what ???
Daniel
So that I can asked her to pay the money la . I have my own ways to talk to her la . Just pass me her number la .
His Friend
Haiya , take la . Make sure you asked her to pay up . If not you will get into trouble .
( Searching for her number )
DISSOLVE TO :
10 . ) AT THE SHOPPING MALL - DAY
Next few days , Daniel went to the shopping mall just for a window shopping . Unintentionly , he wanted to go to G2000 shop .
11 . ) AT THE G2000 SHOP - DAY
While at the G2000 shop , Daniel was browsing at the clothes area and coincidentally he saw Keyla was at the counter attending to a customer . After the customer had left , Keyla was talking to her manager and without her realizing , her manager starts to take advantage on her by touching her hips .
Then in time , Daniel saw the manager was holding her hips and he was so close and flirty towards her . So Daniel quickly approached her manager and without thinking much , Daniel grab his clothes and punch him violently and quickly pull Keyla out of the counter . And to their surprise ,
Manager
YOU ARE FIRED , KEYLA !!!
Keyla felt frustrated for getting fired and Daniel keep pulling her out of the store .
Keyla
LET GO OF ME !!!
( While pulling her hands of from him )
Daniel
Wait Keyla , let me explain …
Keyla
What is there to explain ??? Because of you , I lost my job .
Daniel
Wait , listen . I’m sorry . I’m willing to help you .
( Daniel keep pulling Keyla towards him )
Daniel
Look , actually I’m looking for someone that can take care of my mum and I’m willing to pay the same amount as how much they are paying you now .
Keyla
( Thinking and deciding )
Ok then .
CUT TO :
12 . ) AT DANIEL’S HOUSE - DAY
From that day onwards , Daniel and Keyla became friends and getting more and more closer . By watching the way Keyla treat his mum and being close with her , Daniel decided to change and quit his recent job as a money collector for the loan shark . And he began to respect people around him . At the same time , he wanted to look for a better job but due to his criminal records , he cant and he became jobless .
As day goes by , Keyla notice changes in Daniel . Daniel always keep quiet and lock himself in the room . Keyla feel uneasy and take this chance to talk to Daniel .
Keyla
( Knocking the door )
Daniel , are you alright ?? Can I talk to you ??
Daniel
( Just keeping quiet )
Keyla
( Slowly open up the door )
Keyla
( Walking towards him and sitting beside him )
What’s wrong , Daniel ??
Daniel
I cant get any job now . I cant effort to pay you like what I told you . I’m sorry .
Keyla
It’s ok Daniel . Further more I treat your mum like my own mother .
CUT TO :
13 . ) AT DANIEL’S HOUSE - DAY
Keyla received a called from Daniel and it seems that Daniel wanted to tell Keyla a good news . So Daniel ask Keyla to wait for him under the block and after that they went out for lunch together .
Keyla ( V . O )
(Phone Ring)
Keyla
Hello …
( Pick up the phone )
Daniel
Hello Keyla …
Keyla
Yes , Who are you ?
Daniel
Daniel here …
Keyla
Daniel ?? How did you get my number ?
Daniel
That doesn’t matter I’ll tell you later . Now I have something to tell you , can you meet me under the block now ?
Keyla
Oh ! Ok sure …
( And put down the phone )
CUT TO :
14 . ) UNDER THE BLOCK - DAY
Keyla was waiting for Daniel patiently and within 10 minutes , Daniel arrived . He look so happy . But tragic happen . As Daniel was coming closer towards Keyla , a group of guys come and attack Daniel . Keyla was shock . She shouted for Daniel .
Keyla
Daniel !!!
( Shouting )
Keyla ( V . O )
( Sound of heartbeat )
( And then fade slowly turns to gasping while running towards Daniel )
They left . When Keyla reached for Daniel , she was stunned . Daniel was stabbed and blood flowing continuously .
Keyla
Daniel … Daniel …
( Lifting up Daniel’s head and put on her lap )
Keyla
Daniel … Please say something . Daniel !!!
( Sobbing and started to cry )
Daniel
Keyla , I’m sorry .. I .. I ..
( Slowly close his eyes )
Keyla was panic . Her mind was blank . Don’t know what to do when she saw Daniel slowly letting go his hands of Keyla’s face .
Keyla
DANIEL !!!
( Shout )
FADE TO :
15 . ) AT DANIEL’S HOUSE - NIGHT
It was drizzling , and keyla was sitting by the window . Thinking what’s going to happen to her and Daniel’s mum without Daniel in their life .
Keyla
( Looking at the window )
Keyla
( Turning her head to face Daniel’s mum )
Keyla get up and walk towards Daniel’s mum . By looking at her face , it makes Keyla strong and think that no matter what happen , LIFE HAVE TO GO ON …..
Script Title Page
LIFE OF HOPE
WRITTEN BY
RITCHIE
SULIANAH
MEI MEI
DIN
SAKIL
KAI CHUAN
WRITTEN BY
RITCHIE
SULIANAH
MEI MEI
DIN
SAKIL
KAI CHUAN
Copyright © 2009 Blk 321, Ang Mo Kio Ave2,
Group 3 #2-585, Singapore 587321
Style and Approach of Project
Lighting:
Is a nature light, is using 3 point light with key light, Fill light and back light.
Camera Shots:
MS- For walking.
CU- On the important things or special looks.
WS- Of the place/location.
Music:
We choose the music that suit/match our short film and also opening sequence and ending sequence.
Is a nature light, is using 3 point light with key light, Fill light and back light.
Camera Shots:
MS- For walking.
CU- On the important things or special looks.
WS- Of the place/location.
Music:
We choose the music that suit/match our short film and also opening sequence and ending sequence.
Outline
- Keyla leading a poor life.
- have kidney failure.
- Hooligan name Daniel.
- He’s working for a loan shark
- Still take good care of his parent.
- Send his mum for check-up
- saw this girl (Kayla)
- Something about her that caught his eyes
- Daniel came to this house to collect debts.
- He was shock as the house owner was the girl wh0 have caught his eyes during his mum check-up.
- Made him stumble and losing words in his own mouth.
- Daniel wanted to make friend with Kayla.
- He did many things to attract Kayla attention
- (Daniel payed his own friends to bashed him up in front of keyla)
- Keyla is a soft hearted girl, he still help Daniel even thought he don’t really like Daniel attitude.
- keyla work part time as a sales girl.
- Having a manager wh0 is a flirty type who always took advantage of Keyl
- Daniel even saw it with his own eyes how the managers treat Keyla.
- At first he couldn’t do anything just for the sake of Keyla n her job.
But things didn’t turn on to be smooth.
- Daniel couldn’t control his em0tion and vent into anger and he use violence toward Keyla manager.
- Keyla became the victim, she lost her job.
- Keyla was frustrated with Daniel and scolded Daniel for interfering.
- Daniel felt guilty.
- And he offered keyla to work for him looking after his parent.
- He can get close with Keyla if she works with him.
- Daniel and Keyla became friend.
- Even though Keyla doesn’t like Daniel attitude as he seems to be hypocrite.
- Infr0nt of his parent, he very soft spoken but behind them he's different.
- Since Keyla enter his family life, Daniel seems to change a lot .He respect all e pe0ple around him.
- He began to look for healthy job but he couldnt as he use to have criminal record.
- Even though Keyla is having Kidney Prob,
- She still wants to help those in need.
- She kn0ck 0nto 0ne little girl wh0 dropped her X-ray file.
- Who is having leukemia?
- Needs s0me kind hearted public t0 donate her s0me blood just to make her live.
- Keyla wanted to donate her own blood but she can’t as her blood is not healthy enough.
- Keyla then asked Daniel to help her publish the news.
- It was shock when keyla find out that Daniel himself has volunteered to donate his own blood to that little girl.
- The loan shark came to attack Keyla and threatened her to pay up the debt that she doesn’t even know.
- Keyla refused to pay up.
- They took violence on her but she manage to run away from them
- Keyla had n0 one else to asked for help.
- At that time, the only person he could think of is Daniel who been with her during her bad and good time.
-Daniel wanted to help Keyla with the debt but he himself can’t afford it.
-The loan shark told him if he can’t pay up, either sacrifices her own life or his own life.
- have kidney failure.
- Hooligan name Daniel.
- He’s working for a loan shark
- Still take good care of his parent.
- Send his mum for check-up
- saw this girl (Kayla)
- Something about her that caught his eyes
- Daniel came to this house to collect debts.
- He was shock as the house owner was the girl wh0 have caught his eyes during his mum check-up.
- Made him stumble and losing words in his own mouth.
- Daniel wanted to make friend with Kayla.
- He did many things to attract Kayla attention
- (Daniel payed his own friends to bashed him up in front of keyla)
- Keyla is a soft hearted girl, he still help Daniel even thought he don’t really like Daniel attitude.
- keyla work part time as a sales girl.
- Having a manager wh0 is a flirty type who always took advantage of Keyl
- Daniel even saw it with his own eyes how the managers treat Keyla.
- At first he couldn’t do anything just for the sake of Keyla n her job.
But things didn’t turn on to be smooth.
- Daniel couldn’t control his em0tion and vent into anger and he use violence toward Keyla manager.
- Keyla became the victim, she lost her job.
- Keyla was frustrated with Daniel and scolded Daniel for interfering.
- Daniel felt guilty.
- And he offered keyla to work for him looking after his parent.
- He can get close with Keyla if she works with him.
- Daniel and Keyla became friend.
- Even though Keyla doesn’t like Daniel attitude as he seems to be hypocrite.
- Infr0nt of his parent, he very soft spoken but behind them he's different.
- Since Keyla enter his family life, Daniel seems to change a lot .He respect all e pe0ple around him.
- He began to look for healthy job but he couldnt as he use to have criminal record.
- Even though Keyla is having Kidney Prob,
- She still wants to help those in need.
- She kn0ck 0nto 0ne little girl wh0 dropped her X-ray file.
- Who is having leukemia?
- Needs s0me kind hearted public t0 donate her s0me blood just to make her live.
- Keyla wanted to donate her own blood but she can’t as her blood is not healthy enough.
- Keyla then asked Daniel to help her publish the news.
- It was shock when keyla find out that Daniel himself has volunteered to donate his own blood to that little girl.
- The loan shark came to attack Keyla and threatened her to pay up the debt that she doesn’t even know.
- Keyla refused to pay up.
- They took violence on her but she manage to run away from them
- Keyla had n0 one else to asked for help.
- At that time, the only person he could think of is Daniel who been with her during her bad and good time.
-Daniel wanted to help Keyla with the debt but he himself can’t afford it.
-The loan shark told him if he can’t pay up, either sacrifices her own life or his own life.
Intended Audience
Who?
Above 18 Years
Why?
Our Show need to be in PG know as parent guardian so that people about that age can ask their parental advisory for their parent before watch it.
How?
We can attract customer via make poster and also DVD to public to watch.
Above 18 Years
Why?
Our Show need to be in PG know as parent guardian so that people about that age can ask their parental advisory for their parent before watch it.
How?
We can attract customer via make poster and also DVD to public to watch.
Logline
Daniel who sacrifices his own life for a girl who he love but sadly the girl don’t treasure him as she suffered from kidney failure and won’t give happiness for him
Synopsis
This story is about keyla who suffered from kidney failure and loan shark are coming her for no reason and about a guy who is a hooligan and work for loan shark but who still take pride on others .He fell in love with Keyla and try to attract keyla attention. Came one part of a story of a little girl that keyla accidentally knock onto who have get leukemia and need public sincerity to donate blood for her. Daniel was the one who volunteer to donate his blood to that little girl. The loan shark still running after her to pay up the debt that she doesn’t even know. She has no one else to help except for Daniel who has been with her during her up and down. Daniel sacrifices his own life for the sake of Keyla life and since Daniel death keyla became one quiet girl who stay up in her room realizing that Daniel feeling toward her wasn’t joke .She regret for treating Daniel badly.
Treatment
What & Why.
Script (drafts)
FADE IN
EXT.WALKING DOWN THE STREETS-MR DANIEL-DAY
My name is Daniel. Working as accountancy living with a wife and a son. So far I’ve never been too concern about my health and also about my family because what I presume I’ve already have a good family till then.
I was paralyzed due to fall from a staircase in a flat I stay when I was rushing to work
6 years later.
CUT
INT.IN THE HOSPITAL-MS KELLY-DAY
Discharge day.
Ms Kelly (Wife)
(Asking)
Doctor Ben, I am here for my husband Daniel. What time can he be discharge again?
Doctor Ben
(Answering)
4pm mam. Probably by then if he don't have any last minute fever going on.
Ms Kelly (Wife)
OK. Thanks.
3.) EXT.OUTSIDE THE HOSPITAL GATE-DAY
There’s his best friend, wife and son.
Mr. George (Best friend)
(Being thankful)
At last you are out my friend, been waiting for this moment. Even though last time you are out and have to admit again and again and also come back for treatment, but now you are totally free as bird.
Mr. Daniel
(Talking)
It's all thanks to you and my lovely wife here who helps and be here with me giving me support, and also to you here. (While holding his son head with the appreciation and hugging his wife with the left side of hand)
Mr. George (Best friend)
(With a jealous look)
Yeah, you should thanks to us.
Mr. Daniel
(With the funny normal laugh face)
Ha-ha. I am bro. And that's weird of you to say like that. Ha-ha. You must be joking.
Mr. George (Best friend)
(With a sarcastic look at the back of him looking at Daniel wife behind)
I am. Ha-ha.
Without no feeling that something is going on there, they all went back to Daniel place to settle down.
CUT
4.) NT.INSIDE THE HOUSE-DAY
And so awhile later after they reached.
They were chilling and the conversation started.
Ms Kelly
(Sigh, sitting down, acting sleepy with a boring look)
AHH !!
Mr. George (Best friend)
(with fake look of caring, where else he's asking for it, so he could see Mr. Daniel wife his new wife everyday like always)
Man. I guess I’m going off now. Seen you are here already, I will come if only you need me too.
Mr. Daniel
(With no suspicious feeling, or knows that his wife is having two husband now, he walked Mr. George to his house door out)
Ok. Thanks man. Ill sees you soon.
Just a step away from the door, Mr. Daniel son shouts...
Ken(Son)
Daddy!!! Where are you going?
Mr. Daniel
(Replied with confident that his son is calling him)
Just sending my friend out son.
While his son was reaching for Mr. George hands
And so Mr. Daniel became suspicious with shock and turned his head to his wife while her face turned pale.
Mr. Daniel
(Turn his face to his best friend)
Why? What’s happening here? Why is my son holding his and tight you bro?
Mr. Daniel
(And turns to his wife, expecting the truth to be told, suspiciously)
And why your face changes like you are in the wrong?
Mr. Daniel
(Turn to his best friend again)
Tell me bro, what’s going on here?
Mr. George (Best friend)
(With the brave and hypocrite face)
I’m hers now with you.
Mr. Daniel
(While looking at him)
What! After all this while I treat you like my own brother to really take good care of my wife and son with light hearted you have plan up thing
Mr. Daniel
(While pointing at her)
And you, the one I’ve trusted so much, do this to me.
Mr. George (Best friend)
It wasn't her fault man. I forced her.
Ms Kelly (wife)
No! I’m the one who make the decision.
Mr. Daniel
(With the face down so sad)
So if that’s it. It’s end between us.
Mr. Daniel then rushes to their room and pack his bag. And walk from the room to reach to the front door so he could get out from the house leaving with hurts and lonely.
While his packing his bag with frustration, Ms Kelly asked him.
Ms Kelly (wife)
(While Mr. Daniel packs his bag)
Where are you going?
Ms Kelly (wife)
(After Mr. Daniel leaved their room.)
Where are you going?
Mr. Daniel
(Turn bizarre)
None of your business, you’ve hurt me and I didn't expect you to be with my own best friend whom I’ve trusted so much.
He then walk off from the room and went out to the house door.
Mr. George with nothing else to say just stand near the house door and his wife keep following him.
Mr. Daniel
(While walk passed his wife)
GET OFF FROM MY SIGHT!!! You don’t need me any more right!?
He then opens the front door.
Mr. Daniel
(While Opening and push his best friend away)
You guys don't need to be in my life except, you son. Come go with daddy
(Convincing his son to follow his real dad)
Ms Kelly (wife)
No. You can't take him away.
(While pushing him out of the house and pull her son back)
Mr Daniel struggle off to get his son with Ms kelly, while Mr George ignore them by just looking at them.
And then ...
Ms Kelly(wife)
(she fell and accidently knock her head on the floor and yelled out)
Ouch !!!!
Her son then reach for her and cry mum.
Ken(son)
Mum !!
Mr Daniel Stop and stare them feeling wrong and someway feel he have to work on his own way to get back his life. Before any words came out from any of them Mr George talks in an
Mr. Daniel
NO!! That’s my…...
But he can’t do anything the door then shut by Mr. George
CUT
5.) INT.HIS NEW HOME-NIGHT
Then
[Situation and flashback]
After one week struggling down the streets thinking about what he should do he finally found himself a house to stay in, he rent a room. Lonely and sad without his lovely son he keeps talking to himself and that was the only thing he do and he only left with the house and a little for his food appendences just enough for 2 weeks.
Mr. Daniel
Why? Why!? You betray me. WHY!!!
That’s the only phrase in his mind. He was feeling so depress and sad.
(Flashing back all the time he with his son when he was 5 yrs old)
6.) INT.HOSPITAL-DAY
Holding his son while talking
Mr. Daniel
Ken. Daddy love you. Daddy will always be there for you no matter how hard the situation is. Mum will always be there if Daddy still here but my heart will always here with you son.
7.) INT.AT THE PARK-DAY
Playing with his son while his own wheelchair. Throwing small ball for him to catch. Roll his wheelchair to reach Ken back.
8.) INT.OLD HOUSE-NIGHT
Kissed his son when his son was on the bed sleeping
9.) INT.NEW HOME
He died by eating pills and then fades out
EXT.WALKING DOWN THE STREETS-MR DANIEL-DAY
My name is Daniel. Working as accountancy living with a wife and a son. So far I’ve never been too concern about my health and also about my family because what I presume I’ve already have a good family till then.
I was paralyzed due to fall from a staircase in a flat I stay when I was rushing to work
6 years later.
CUT
INT.IN THE HOSPITAL-MS KELLY-DAY
Discharge day.
Ms Kelly (Wife)
(Asking)
Doctor Ben, I am here for my husband Daniel. What time can he be discharge again?
Doctor Ben
(Answering)
4pm mam. Probably by then if he don't have any last minute fever going on.
Ms Kelly (Wife)
OK. Thanks.
3.) EXT.OUTSIDE THE HOSPITAL GATE-DAY
There’s his best friend, wife and son.
Mr. George (Best friend)
(Being thankful)
At last you are out my friend, been waiting for this moment. Even though last time you are out and have to admit again and again and also come back for treatment, but now you are totally free as bird.
Mr. Daniel
(Talking)
It's all thanks to you and my lovely wife here who helps and be here with me giving me support, and also to you here. (While holding his son head with the appreciation and hugging his wife with the left side of hand)
Mr. George (Best friend)
(With a jealous look)
Yeah, you should thanks to us.
Mr. Daniel
(With the funny normal laugh face)
Ha-ha. I am bro. And that's weird of you to say like that. Ha-ha. You must be joking.
Mr. George (Best friend)
(With a sarcastic look at the back of him looking at Daniel wife behind)
I am. Ha-ha.
Without no feeling that something is going on there, they all went back to Daniel place to settle down.
CUT
4.) NT.INSIDE THE HOUSE-DAY
And so awhile later after they reached.
They were chilling and the conversation started.
Ms Kelly
(Sigh, sitting down, acting sleepy with a boring look)
AHH !!
Mr. George (Best friend)
(with fake look of caring, where else he's asking for it, so he could see Mr. Daniel wife his new wife everyday like always)
Man. I guess I’m going off now. Seen you are here already, I will come if only you need me too.
Mr. Daniel
(With no suspicious feeling, or knows that his wife is having two husband now, he walked Mr. George to his house door out)
Ok. Thanks man. Ill sees you soon.
Just a step away from the door, Mr. Daniel son shouts...
Ken(Son)
Daddy!!! Where are you going?
Mr. Daniel
(Replied with confident that his son is calling him)
Just sending my friend out son.
While his son was reaching for Mr. George hands
And so Mr. Daniel became suspicious with shock and turned his head to his wife while her face turned pale.
Mr. Daniel
(Turn his face to his best friend)
Why? What’s happening here? Why is my son holding his and tight you bro?
Mr. Daniel
(And turns to his wife, expecting the truth to be told, suspiciously)
And why your face changes like you are in the wrong?
Mr. Daniel
(Turn to his best friend again)
Tell me bro, what’s going on here?
Mr. George (Best friend)
(With the brave and hypocrite face)
I’m hers now with you.
Mr. Daniel
(While looking at him)
What! After all this while I treat you like my own brother to really take good care of my wife and son with light hearted you have plan up thing
Mr. Daniel
(While pointing at her)
And you, the one I’ve trusted so much, do this to me.
Mr. George (Best friend)
It wasn't her fault man. I forced her.
Ms Kelly (wife)
No! I’m the one who make the decision.
Mr. Daniel
(With the face down so sad)
So if that’s it. It’s end between us.
Mr. Daniel then rushes to their room and pack his bag. And walk from the room to reach to the front door so he could get out from the house leaving with hurts and lonely.
While his packing his bag with frustration, Ms Kelly asked him.
Ms Kelly (wife)
(While Mr. Daniel packs his bag)
Where are you going?
Ms Kelly (wife)
(After Mr. Daniel leaved their room.)
Where are you going?
Mr. Daniel
(Turn bizarre)
None of your business, you’ve hurt me and I didn't expect you to be with my own best friend whom I’ve trusted so much.
He then walk off from the room and went out to the house door.
Mr. George with nothing else to say just stand near the house door and his wife keep following him.
Mr. Daniel
(While walk passed his wife)
GET OFF FROM MY SIGHT!!! You don’t need me any more right!?
He then opens the front door.
Mr. Daniel
(While Opening and push his best friend away)
You guys don't need to be in my life except, you son. Come go with daddy
(Convincing his son to follow his real dad)
Ms Kelly (wife)
No. You can't take him away.
(While pushing him out of the house and pull her son back)
Mr Daniel struggle off to get his son with Ms kelly, while Mr George ignore them by just looking at them.
And then ...
Ms Kelly(wife)
(she fell and accidently knock her head on the floor and yelled out)
Ouch !!!!
Her son then reach for her and cry mum.
Ken(son)
Mum !!
Mr Daniel Stop and stare them feeling wrong and someway feel he have to work on his own way to get back his life. Before any words came out from any of them Mr George talks in an
Mr. Daniel
NO!! That’s my…...
But he can’t do anything the door then shut by Mr. George
CUT
5.) INT.HIS NEW HOME-NIGHT
Then
[Situation and flashback]
After one week struggling down the streets thinking about what he should do he finally found himself a house to stay in, he rent a room. Lonely and sad without his lovely son he keeps talking to himself and that was the only thing he do and he only left with the house and a little for his food appendences just enough for 2 weeks.
Mr. Daniel
Why? Why!? You betray me. WHY!!!
That’s the only phrase in his mind. He was feeling so depress and sad.
(Flashing back all the time he with his son when he was 5 yrs old)
6.) INT.HOSPITAL-DAY
Holding his son while talking
Mr. Daniel
Ken. Daddy love you. Daddy will always be there for you no matter how hard the situation is. Mum will always be there if Daddy still here but my heart will always here with you son.
7.) INT.AT THE PARK-DAY
Playing with his son while his own wheelchair. Throwing small ball for him to catch. Roll his wheelchair to reach Ken back.
8.) INT.OLD HOUSE-NIGHT
Kissed his son when his son was on the bed sleeping
9.) INT.NEW HOME
He died by eating pills and then fades out
Post-mortem report of 300 words - Annah
Start of the term we have to rush up with our Video development project .
Each of us divided up to do our own paper work .
Our 1st story are planned during the school holiday but then when sch00l reopen we were told that our story have no flows that we have to change story .
We as a group then draft on with an new script but the same result as we got from the first story but then we were told to elaborate the story with some comedies on it but then we have difficulty in elaborating comedies and I give up and tell din to start doing script .
We were all happy as our script are done but when it reach our lecturer tables ,and there goes again we have to do new story as it were totally flat story with no flows and learning in that story .We were totally fed up too as we have complete our storyboard base on this story ,and not only that our paper work also need changes .
We were told that our group was the last group who have not produce any story .We were all left behind ,and it make me stress up hearing that about our group and on that day itself spending ma two day on new story with the help of miss Janice .
The new story was accepted by our lecturer but still our story need to find an ending,and I ask for sakaii help ,he have got 2 different ending and most of us pick the 2nd ending as it have a sad ending ,and done gave miss Janice to read and well done group,we can proceed on with our script .yeah !
Right after our script finished,there comes again our stress,0h my !our paper work that due on 28th August and not even one of it are done .
Our producer divide our paper work following our roles but the paper work that producer and director should be doing bt we have to change as our story supposingly the producer was the one who produce but it was the other way round .
Right now,our group are busy with our own paper work and there small misunderstood between us sometimes because of loads of paperwork to be done .bt it all end up with harmony as we as a group promises to do our paper work with the help of each of us .
Each of us divided up to do our own paper work .
Our 1st story are planned during the school holiday but then when sch00l reopen we were told that our story have no flows that we have to change story .
We as a group then draft on with an new script but the same result as we got from the first story but then we were told to elaborate the story with some comedies on it but then we have difficulty in elaborating comedies and I give up and tell din to start doing script .
We were all happy as our script are done but when it reach our lecturer tables ,and there goes again we have to do new story as it were totally flat story with no flows and learning in that story .We were totally fed up too as we have complete our storyboard base on this story ,and not only that our paper work also need changes .
We were told that our group was the last group who have not produce any story .We were all left behind ,and it make me stress up hearing that about our group and on that day itself spending ma two day on new story with the help of miss Janice .
The new story was accepted by our lecturer but still our story need to find an ending,and I ask for sakaii help ,he have got 2 different ending and most of us pick the 2nd ending as it have a sad ending ,and done gave miss Janice to read and well done group,we can proceed on with our script .yeah !
Right after our script finished,there comes again our stress,0h my !our paper work that due on 28th August and not even one of it are done .
Our producer divide our paper work following our roles but the paper work that producer and director should be doing bt we have to change as our story supposingly the producer was the one who produce but it was the other way round .
Right now,our group are busy with our own paper work and there small misunderstood between us sometimes because of loads of paperwork to be done .bt it all end up with harmony as we as a group promises to do our paper work with the help of each of us .
Post-mortem report of 300 words - Din
First of all in the group I’m holding on to a role which is I’m the Audio Engineer. Assistant director while helping director with work and also giving advices that are needed for them. I’ve also helped my producer and director to communicate well with people that couldn’t understand them much in their English. In the other hand for paper works I’ve done was the whole script how’s the story goes, logline, outline of the story, cast information, casting data report, Audition application form and also talent release.
As an Audio Engineer to I’ve describe to them how the sound will go. I’ve done the script 3 times due to reject storyline from director. Crew contact list was also done by me and more else I’ve done a story line and end up handing up to the director and she rewrite it and do another one and I helped director on some idea for the story line and also the main reason for the audio.
And I also did go to places for location and I’m also doing the location agreement form. I also created the blog site for us to post things there and also call for talents and the 3 talents are under me. With the help of my producer I’m also the camera man for the story boards while he instruct me what to do. Went to town and we took all pictures we need to be in the story board together with other crew mates.
I do take picture of them to make satisfaction that we do our work. In other hand I helped to print the things that Producer need. Every time before we conform all the things I’ve done is acceptable I will send the work to Producer for him to check and he will send every crew mates for safety purpose. If it was done badly he’ll send me an email for me to correct my mistake on it. With his help, I and he will always communicate in email because that’s the fastest response and easier way for us to get each other.
As an Audio Engineer to I’ve describe to them how the sound will go. I’ve done the script 3 times due to reject storyline from director. Crew contact list was also done by me and more else I’ve done a story line and end up handing up to the director and she rewrite it and do another one and I helped director on some idea for the story line and also the main reason for the audio.
And I also did go to places for location and I’m also doing the location agreement form. I also created the blog site for us to post things there and also call for talents and the 3 talents are under me. With the help of my producer I’m also the camera man for the story boards while he instruct me what to do. Went to town and we took all pictures we need to be in the story board together with other crew mates.
I do take picture of them to make satisfaction that we do our work. In other hand I helped to print the things that Producer need. Every time before we conform all the things I’ve done is acceptable I will send the work to Producer for him to check and he will send every crew mates for safety purpose. If it was done badly he’ll send me an email for me to correct my mistake on it. With his help, I and he will always communicate in email because that’s the fastest response and easier way for us to get each other.
Post-mortem report of 300 words - Mei Mei
Writing with my poor English, hope you will understand what I’m trying to type here.
By right I have completed my Characterization, Style and Project Approach and Treatment long time ago. Kai Chuan didn’t come to school, I help him to complete the Breakdown sheet. But who’s know, end up waiting for them to complete their paper work. But annah can’t finish her storyboard, so Ritchie, Din and me help her. But we done finish, did not hand in on time to Ms Janice. Suddenly don’t know what happened, the whole story change again and again. The story have been changing for 3 times? I think.
Through out of the whole entire, I’m still struggling redoing my Characterization, Style and Project Approach, Treatment, Breakdown Sheet. As for the Props List, Costume List, Pre Production Schedule, Pretty Cash, Individual Pretty Cash, Crew List, Crew Information Sheet, Crew Contact List. I have done, after they changed the third story, so don’t need to redo. =) I have finish my Characterization, but I wants to improve on it and also improve on the Costume List. As for the Crew List, Crew Information Sheet, Crew Contact List I have completed, but need to re-edit. Due to Sakaii wants to quit school, haven’t decided. Have been missing in action for about one month’s, since school reopens. So we have decided not to include her name in the Crew List, Crew Information Sheet, Crew Contact List. But one month’s later, she came back, so I need to do some editing for the Crews stuff, to include hers information. But who’s know she back, but don’t get to see her in school. She is missing in action again.
As for the Treatment, still doing half way through. Hope to complete as soon as possible.
For the Pre Production Schedule, still need to improve by edit and put more things inside the schedule slots. Whenever they can’t finish their work, I just help to complete another paper work. I have been doing a lot of paper work till tired, still need to complete. As for some paper work, I do not know how to do, I will refer to the pervious paper work as for my sample/ example. Or really don’t understand then ask Ms Janice how to do and have completed the paper work.
Breakdown sheet haven’t start redo. Hope I can complete Treatment, Characterization, Costume List by next Monday. So that I can continue with my other paper work that I have not started. Annah do half way, go facebook, then have stopped doing her paper work, then the paper work don’t know till when will be complete. She go facebook, I also go facebook. But I go facebook plus doing my paper work. Maybe different people have different style. Or she lazy? Or may as well I help her complete ba.=) To make sure everything are doing well and can be complete soon. Din? Don’t know is he doing any paper work a not? Did not come to school often.
Then as for Kai Chuan, don’t know how to do the call sheet, then I have explain to him.
As for Sakaii, she don’t know how to do the log sheet. Ya, I wanted to explain to her, but she said she will forget. Then no point explaining to her now, by wasting my effort. She told me to tell her on the actual day. Then happily waiting for the actual day to comes and teach her how to do the Log Sheet.
There’s one day, I’m sick on mc for 2days. I’m away from school, still doing, planning for style and Project Approach, by writing down on a piece of paper.
I really hopes they will change their attitude on doing group project. =) If they are mature enough to think. They have computer at home, can go internet, can be done their paper works or research at home fast and complete. But I don’t think they are putting effort on it. As for me, I don’t have computer at home, I need to do my paper works, research and serve net in school. =P Some of them come to school just for serving internet, why not staying at home ne?0,0’’’
As for Ritchie, I know he is doing some work, but he is throwing a lot of paper works, typing all the call sheet and other stuff towards me, due to members have theirs lazy-ness. =(
By right I have completed my Characterization, Style and Project Approach and Treatment long time ago. Kai Chuan didn’t come to school, I help him to complete the Breakdown sheet. But who’s know, end up waiting for them to complete their paper work. But annah can’t finish her storyboard, so Ritchie, Din and me help her. But we done finish, did not hand in on time to Ms Janice. Suddenly don’t know what happened, the whole story change again and again. The story have been changing for 3 times? I think.
Through out of the whole entire, I’m still struggling redoing my Characterization, Style and Project Approach, Treatment, Breakdown Sheet. As for the Props List, Costume List, Pre Production Schedule, Pretty Cash, Individual Pretty Cash, Crew List, Crew Information Sheet, Crew Contact List. I have done, after they changed the third story, so don’t need to redo. =) I have finish my Characterization, but I wants to improve on it and also improve on the Costume List. As for the Crew List, Crew Information Sheet, Crew Contact List I have completed, but need to re-edit. Due to Sakaii wants to quit school, haven’t decided. Have been missing in action for about one month’s, since school reopens. So we have decided not to include her name in the Crew List, Crew Information Sheet, Crew Contact List. But one month’s later, she came back, so I need to do some editing for the Crews stuff, to include hers information. But who’s know she back, but don’t get to see her in school. She is missing in action again.
As for the Treatment, still doing half way through. Hope to complete as soon as possible.
For the Pre Production Schedule, still need to improve by edit and put more things inside the schedule slots. Whenever they can’t finish their work, I just help to complete another paper work. I have been doing a lot of paper work till tired, still need to complete. As for some paper work, I do not know how to do, I will refer to the pervious paper work as for my sample/ example. Or really don’t understand then ask Ms Janice how to do and have completed the paper work.
Breakdown sheet haven’t start redo. Hope I can complete Treatment, Characterization, Costume List by next Monday. So that I can continue with my other paper work that I have not started. Annah do half way, go facebook, then have stopped doing her paper work, then the paper work don’t know till when will be complete. She go facebook, I also go facebook. But I go facebook plus doing my paper work. Maybe different people have different style. Or she lazy? Or may as well I help her complete ba.=) To make sure everything are doing well and can be complete soon. Din? Don’t know is he doing any paper work a not? Did not come to school often.
Then as for Kai Chuan, don’t know how to do the call sheet, then I have explain to him.
As for Sakaii, she don’t know how to do the log sheet. Ya, I wanted to explain to her, but she said she will forget. Then no point explaining to her now, by wasting my effort. She told me to tell her on the actual day. Then happily waiting for the actual day to comes and teach her how to do the Log Sheet.
There’s one day, I’m sick on mc for 2days. I’m away from school, still doing, planning for style and Project Approach, by writing down on a piece of paper.
I really hopes they will change their attitude on doing group project. =) If they are mature enough to think. They have computer at home, can go internet, can be done their paper works or research at home fast and complete. But I don’t think they are putting effort on it. As for me, I don’t have computer at home, I need to do my paper works, research and serve net in school. =P Some of them come to school just for serving internet, why not staying at home ne?0,0’’’
As for Ritchie, I know he is doing some work, but he is throwing a lot of paper works, typing all the call sheet and other stuff towards me, due to members have theirs lazy-ness. =(
Post-mortem report of 300 words - Ritchie
Final Year Project has just started its early July 09 and I just realities that time really past very fast without know anything when the day just past, It’s been a pretty busy period for our group this term because we need to complete all our Pre-Production paper works by 28 Aug so that our teacher will allow us to going out for our Production during our first week of September but I really learn to enjoy the little things and sometimes these are the exact things that pulls us trough in pre-production stage before going on during the production stage but then I believe that I will learn lot of thing but it’s not just the experience that requires during the Pre-production, there’s never been a greater need in whole production after the whole project by 6 Nov 2009.
During the 3 Aug 09, we have complete our location agreement and two of our location is confirm to let us shoot but our storyboard have to redo again because our story have been change again but than we have to postponed our audition have been postponed to next week because our talents cannot make it audition so we need to find other day, we still look of actor/actress for our final year project but we will be shoot from 31 Aug till 20 Sept 09. It’s not really easy to really find actor/actress.
At meantime, we knew that next week’s paper work that we need to pass up all our Pre-Production stage paper by 28th August 2009, so I just try my best to rush my group member with paper work so that I will take all paper work by 27th august 2009 before the dateline.
I believe that I will try my best to do what I can during pre-production, production and also post-production stage if I didn’t done well for my FYP will be fine with me because I know that I have just learn lot of lesson in project and I will take back the lesson that I learn and apply in further next time when I working with people.
Before I would like to end off my post-mortem of pre-production, I believe that we need to change as group is that we need to encourage one and other for coming to school on time, ask them to coming school and other more things.
If that I would like to end off my post-mortem of pre-production and hope that my production will going well.
During the 3 Aug 09, we have complete our location agreement and two of our location is confirm to let us shoot but our storyboard have to redo again because our story have been change again but than we have to postponed our audition have been postponed to next week because our talents cannot make it audition so we need to find other day, we still look of actor/actress for our final year project but we will be shoot from 31 Aug till 20 Sept 09. It’s not really easy to really find actor/actress.
At meantime, we knew that next week’s paper work that we need to pass up all our Pre-Production stage paper by 28th August 2009, so I just try my best to rush my group member with paper work so that I will take all paper work by 27th august 2009 before the dateline.
I believe that I will try my best to do what I can during pre-production, production and also post-production stage if I didn’t done well for my FYP will be fine with me because I know that I have just learn lot of lesson in project and I will take back the lesson that I learn and apply in further next time when I working with people.
Before I would like to end off my post-mortem of pre-production, I believe that we need to change as group is that we need to encourage one and other for coming to school on time, ask them to coming school and other more things.
If that I would like to end off my post-mortem of pre-production and hope that my production will going well.
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